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Blood Drive is a short story by Jeffery Ford. Throughout this short story the author plays with time making it hard for the reader to know what time period this story is taking part in. It also plays with the plot setting.The audience couldn't tell if the main characters lived in the country side or in the city. The author does this to show that the issue on guns is not just localized in the country but is a problem in the city as well. This style is one of the characteristics of post-modernism. Also the author uses juxtaposition of certain events at the main characters school and her reactions. For example the main character is looking out the window and watches a class mate shoot himself with a stunt gun and she just continuous walking down the hall to go to the bathroom. To the audience this is something that is disturbing and shocking and we expect the character to have the same reaction but she doesn't. This is done to reveal this reality that we almost treat this gun incident as normal and makes us question whether we want this to be "normal". Then the author reveals the ugly truth as the message in the end of the story. The title blood drive is an indication of this. In the end all the classmates went against one another and began to shoot each other. The main character was the only one was not shot and killed in the classroom. She was also the only one in the classroom that didn't pull out her gun. This shows the truth that gun can cause a mass destruction and doesn't really protect you from others.
When
the good weather of spring hit, people got giddy and tense. There were
accidents. In homeroom one bright morning, Darcy dropped her bag on her desk,
and the derringer inside went off and took out Ralph Babb’s right eye. He lived,
but when he came back to school his head was kind of caved in and he had a bad
fake eye that looked like a kid drew it. It only stared straight ahead. Another
was when Mr.Hallibet got angry because everybody got into the habit of
challenging his current events lectures after seeing Constance in action. He
yelled for us all to shut up and accidently squeezed off a round. Luckily for
us the gun was pointed at the ceiling. Mr.Gosh, though, who was sitting in the
room a floor above, directly over Hallibet, had to have buckshot taken out of
his ass. When he returned to school from a week off. He was sweating more than
ever.
Mixed in with the unusual spring fever, there was all
kinds of drama over who was going to the prom with who. Fist fights, girl
fights, plenty of drawn guns but not for comedy. I noticed that the Kind of
Vermont was getting wackier the more people refused to notice him. When I left
my sixth-period class to use the bathroom, I saw him out on the soccer field
from the upstairs hallway window. He turned the stun gun on himself and shot
the two darts with wires into his own chest. It knocked him down fast, and he
was twitching on the ground. I went and took a piss. When I passed the window
again, he was gone. He’d started bringing alcohol to school, and at lunch,
where we were back by the woods hanging out, he’d drink a Red Bull and a half
pint of vodka.
Right around that time, I met Constance at the town library
one night. I had nothing to do, but she had to write a paper. When I arrived,
she put the paper away and was reading. I asked her what the book was. She told
me, “Pluto”
“Good Story?” I asked.
She explained it wasn’t a novel, but
a book about ideas. “You see,” she said, “there’s a cave and this guy gets
chained up inside so that he can’t turn around or move but only stare at the
back wall. There’s a fire in the cave behind him and it cast his shadow on the
wall his faces. That play of light and shadow is the sum total of his reality.
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Blood Drive is a short story by Jeffery Ford. Throughout this short story the author plays with time making it hard for the reader to know what time period this story is taking part in. It also plays with the plot setting.The audience couldn't tell if the main characters lived in the country side or in the city. The author does this to show that the issue on guns is not just localized in the country but is a problem in the city as well. This style is one of the characteristics of post-modernism. Also the author uses juxtaposition of certain events at the main characters school and her reactions. For example the main character is looking out the window and watches a class mate shoot himself with a stunt gun and she just continuous walking down the hall to go to the bathroom. To the audience this is something that is disturbing and shocking and we expect the character to have the same reaction but she doesn't. This is done to reveal this reality that we almost treat this gun incident as normal and makes us question whether we want this to be "normal". Then the author reveals the ugly truth as the message in the end of the story. The title blood drive is an indication of this. In the end all the classmates went against one another and began to shoot each other. The main character was the only one was not shot and killed in the classroom. She was also the only one in the classroom that didn't pull out her gun. This shows the truth that gun can cause a mass destruction and doesn't really protect you from others.
I would maybe first start out with introducing which framework you are using so the reader knows. Good choices of parts to use for your criticism, the implications and meanings of them were explained well. Good connections are made to modern life and modern meaning/implications.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really cool piece of writing to pick and I think that it was a really good choice to use it for post-modernism. However, I agree with Adam, I think that you should give some context to the story first instead of starting with the story.
ReplyDeleteI like the story and do look forward to reading more of the guy's work. If I had to say anything, I'd just try and keep the tone more casual and such. Like, be like "whatsup" or something idk I just feel like you get your ideas better across when you're chill.
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